First Impression Critique

$50.00

Get clear, actionable feedback on your query letter, synopsis, and opening five pages to see how your submission package lands on an agent or editor's desk.

What’s Included

  • One Round: Receive a comprehensive critique form delivering actionable feedback and recommended revisions across your complete submission package.

  • Query Letter Review: In-depth feedback on your hook, conflict, stakes, pitch clarity, and author bio.

  • First Five Pages Review: Focused evaluation of opening action, dialogue flow, showing vs. telling, narrative voice, and reader connection.

  • Synopsis Review: Structural feedback on setting, main character arcs, plot progression, and resolution.

Materials to Submit

Send your story's query letter, synopsis, and first 5 double-spaced pages.

Get clear, actionable feedback on your query letter, synopsis, and opening five pages to see how your submission package lands on an agent or editor's desk.

What’s Included

  • One Round: Receive a comprehensive critique form delivering actionable feedback and recommended revisions across your complete submission package.

  • Query Letter Review: In-depth feedback on your hook, conflict, stakes, pitch clarity, and author bio.

  • First Five Pages Review: Focused evaluation of opening action, dialogue flow, showing vs. telling, narrative voice, and reader connection.

  • Synopsis Review: Structural feedback on setting, main character arcs, plot progression, and resolution.

Materials to Submit

Send your story's query letter, synopsis, and first 5 double-spaced pages.